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The speaker is so reassuring with her words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 6, 2011 at 4:49 PM
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If I was a shadow
Very romantic and poignant.
posted by
2Philomena
on March 6, 2011 at 3:09 PM
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Sinome, this is powerfully and yet subtly beautiful....
Great imagery in the shadow play....your poetry is always good, but this is one of the best, at least in my opinion.
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posted by
Rumor
on March 6, 2011 at 11:50 AM
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This felt like a
gentle caress
posted by
malcolm
on March 6, 2011 at 9:25 AM
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Sinome
To be in your shadow is Light itself when the beauty of your poem reigns..Wonderful, Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on March 6, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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Even as a shadow you would be lovely.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 5, 2011 at 8:58 PM
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Sinome
A very interesting poem, that for some reason reminds me of Strauss' 'The Woman without a Shadow'...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 5, 2011 at 8:28 PM
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Sinome
So I'm telling you, anyone who writes poetry as you do, if you became a shadow your touch of poetry would still be loving.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 5, 2011 at 8:21 PM
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Kudos Simone darling.
posted by
Kabu
on March 5, 2011 at 4:15 PM
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Beautiful as always Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on March 5, 2011 at 3:49 PM
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