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Raye09
® I want to grow surrounded by each other love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 21, 2011 at 4:28 PM
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Raye....
Brimming over with emotions from icy cold to flaming hot, you've covered a lot (hey, that rhymes...:)....rich in imagery and all nicely wrapped up and sealed in the closing line, "still loving you."..
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posted by
Rumor
on March 21, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Very well stated, Dear TAPS! So many troubles out there..Thank you...
posted by
Raye09
on March 21, 2011 at 6:10 AM
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Thank you so much, Dear Sam!
posted by
Raye09
on March 21, 2011 at 6:10 AM
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Thank you, Chuck...
posted by
Raye09
on March 21, 2011 at 6:09 AM
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It is good to read poems of love and longing
to relieve our minds for a time of worldly troubles
and cause us to remember.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 20, 2011 at 8:49 PM
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I loved the lunar light awakening the dark; how utterly awesome! I loved how this came together as well! Magnificent poem Dear Raye! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 20, 2011 at 7:18 PM
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very nice
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 20, 2011 at 5:20 PM
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Thank you, Samantha..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 2:32 PM
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Thanks so much, FSI...
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 2:32 PM
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posted by
Samantha39
on March 20, 2011 at 1:04 PM
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I loved reading about the speaker's zeal for nature.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 20, 2011 at 12:11 PM
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Thank you very much, Utah..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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Yes, CC. Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 6:41 AM
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Much appreciated, Dear Shobana..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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Re: the dance of life .....
Thank you, Shams..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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Re: We have been out looking at the close lunar Sphere...Wiley has a
Thank you, Dear Kabu
- I didn't get much of a view because of heavy and unrelenting cloud cover..
posted by
Raye09
on March 20, 2011 at 6:39 AM
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I have had these same nights that you have so perfectly raveled in words...well done.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 20, 2011 at 5:43 AM
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Very emotional Raye an insight into what you feel
posted by
C_C_T
on March 20, 2011 at 1:26 AM
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So beautiful Raye - excellent vision.
posted by
shobana
on March 20, 2011 at 12:08 AM
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the dance of life .....
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on March 19, 2011 at 9:15 PM
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We have been out looking at the close lunar Sphere...Wiley has a
wonderful picture. your poem sends me out for another look.
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Kabu
on March 19, 2011 at 7:36 PM
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