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Sinome
R The thoughts shine through this poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 22, 2011 at 9:36 PM
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Sinome
This is an amazing poem, a love poem both powerful and tender...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 22, 2011 at 8:17 PM
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Wow. I so enjoyed this extremely powerful, heart-felt piece. (Like the new format, as well).
posted by
Troosha
on March 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
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Wonderful it is when that special someone is in our thoughts.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2011 at 11:43 AM
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BEAUTIFUL POEM FROM THE HEART, SOUNDS LIKE A MEMORY THAT MIGHT NOT ALWAYS BE THE BEST THING FOR ONES SOUL, BUT ONE THAT MUST BE KEPT, A POEM THAT STIRS THE EMOTIONS , I LOVED IT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 22, 2011 at 10:40 AM
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I think what makes you a great poet is that you capture a little of each of your readers in your words that you paint so masterfully in each picture you write.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 22, 2011 at 10:36 AM
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like you tis a thing of beauty and a joy to read.
posted by
Kabu
on March 22, 2011 at 8:40 AM
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Beautiful characterization. You found the words. It changes and gets
richer as it goes along. - Bob
posted by
2902
on March 22, 2011 at 5:13 AM
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Poignant, soaring, and utterly beautiful!
posted by
adnohr
on March 22, 2011 at 4:37 AM
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Love bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things, and it never fails. (I Corinthians 13)
posted by
TAPS.
on March 22, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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Love the staccato rhythm advancing as if to finally claim a thought. The melody is haunting as the passing swirls thru our fingers again, as if to know it, in all it's finality, once again.
posted by
jfm32
on March 21, 2011 at 9:28 PM
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Like Justi, I love this poem too..
posted by
shobana
on March 21, 2011 at 9:19 PM
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I love this poem. I did not get it all clearly I am sure, but it is so beautiful and so is the nam Violet Grace so pretty.....
posted by
Justi
on March 21, 2011 at 9:12 PM
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