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Ah! Naut writes poetry, too! I like it, glad I found this! Your haiku response is so appropriate (and encouraging - I'm still waiting for the breath of warm air).
posted by
juliah
on April 5, 2011 at 1:09 AM
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Thanks for your comment! As you rightly say, traditional celebrations and rituals are followed more in rural areas, but there is still a large percentage of city dwellers who follow them!
posted by
Nita09
on April 4, 2011 at 10:17 AM
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Very nice Naut, I could visualize the whole thing! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 3, 2011 at 9:48 PM
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I just read Juliah's poem and I think the haiku complements it very well Naut.
posted by
shobana
on April 3, 2011 at 2:24 AM
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Naut, funny you should mention robins.....
We are deluged by them this spring - I honestly have never seen so many this early....and I don't even mind them when they start chirping before the sun is even up..
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posted by
Rumor
on April 2, 2011 at 3:24 PM
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I can just see that bird...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 2, 2011 at 12:55 PM
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Nautikos
' Hopefully as your poem conveys the sentiment of the robin Naut. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on April 2, 2011 at 11:21 AM
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I love it.
My three-year-old Megan from Florida, where they do not have robins, saw a robin in my tree and was thrilled because she had recognized it from a little book she has.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 2, 2011 at 6:20 AM
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Excellent!
posted by
Nita09
on April 2, 2011 at 2:31 AM
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finally you posted a poem I have been waiting for this
posted by
Tzippy
on April 1, 2011 at 11:10 PM
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Beautifully done Naut... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 1, 2011 at 10:25 PM
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Very light and spring-y! I liked your previous poem, too. - Bob
posted by
2902
on April 1, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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really well done Matey.. Good Joice of words. LOL.....
posted by
Kabu
on April 1, 2011 at 5:01 PM
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Yes,I liked it in her comments too.
posted by
UtahJay
on April 1, 2011 at 9:05 AM
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