Go to DON'T MIND ME, I'M JUST HANGING OUT HERE
- Add a comment
- Go to DO YOU OR HAVE YOU EVER LIVED THERE?
2Philomena
Thank you so much I don't write poetry much anymore but I love to try. Be blessed
posted by
Justi
on June 27, 2011 at 5:46 PM
| link to this | reply
Do you or have you ever lived there?
This was a very strong poem with an excellent metaphor we can all relate to. For me I stayed inside the box of the things I couldn't do because I was afraid to launch out bravely into my poetry in case that failed too. When I emerged from this box I found that writing was my true strength and at last gained faith in myself to pursue it.
posted by
2Philomena
on June 27, 2011 at 4:23 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 22, 2011 at 12:46 PM
| link to this | reply
I would be elated to discuss Jesus but I am not one to enter into an open forum on politics, there are too many folks who respond cruelly when they disagree! I love a good debate but many do not understand how to debate! Nice poem, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 22, 2011 at 7:37 AM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Ariala
on April 22, 2011 at 5:29 AM
| link to this | reply
I do like the thought of the box that holds us back from whatever we don't
want to face. it really is taking the easy way out.....I been known to do that.
this is a really thought provoking work darling. Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on April 21, 2011 at 5:06 PM
| link to this | reply
an invisible box... yes...
posted by
poet_prophetess
on April 21, 2011 at 4:22 PM
| link to this | reply
Good one ! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 21, 2011 at 2:46 PM
| link to this | reply