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I was so engrossed in the imagery and then caught a bit off guard with the conclusion! Fantastic! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2011 at 4:42 PM
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Sorry, hehe..
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 6:56 PM
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Oops, that startled me,so quick in reply! Thanks.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 5, 2011 at 6:54 PM
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Thank you so much, FSI!
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 6:51 PM
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P.s. - it may be in my comment section, but it is ALL yours! Post it in your blog - no prob. anywhere! And Thanks again for giving me a sneak preview..:)
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Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 6:51 PM
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Oh, no Apologies, Cuplets! I
love your verse, just saw it - Thank You so much for honoring me, please feel free whenever..
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 6:49 PM
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My apologies Raye, I`m not very good at this computer business. But you are welcome to the misplacement.
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 5, 2011 at 6:47 PM
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OVERCAST
Are they trout
that rise and rise again!?
Or intersecting rings
of falling rain?
posted by
CUPLETS
on May 5, 2011 at 6:29 PM
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I like how you build to the last line.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2011 at 5:10 PM
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YAY, a comment!
I was starting to think this entry was invisible..:) Thank You, Dear Shobana..
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 4:24 PM
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Just lovely Raye.
posted by
shobana
on May 5, 2011 at 4:15 PM
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