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That was a delightful way to end the poem! I found myself seeing it as I read it and it could have easily been a documentary in its own right! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2011 at 5:04 PM
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"only faith can stand against the scourge of pain"....
Gerontian, I'm sure the pain you must bear is way beyond anything we could ever imagine, your imagery says a lot...thankfully you do have your faith to hold you up.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 6, 2011 at 6:28 AM
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D Awesome imagery! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 6, 2011 at 5:20 AM
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Incredible work..."Only Faith" - how true this
posted by
Raye09
on May 5, 2011 at 8:26 PM
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Your intellect is WAAAAAYYYY beyond mine...
I admit to not having a clue as to what you refer! thanks for visiting my site today!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 5, 2011 at 7:59 PM
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Excellent imagery
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 5, 2011 at 4:29 PM
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This is a wonderfully constructed poem, both powerful and moving...mindful of the temples of Osiris and Seti. Thank you for your kind words today.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 5, 2011 at 3:06 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 5, 2011 at 2:50 PM
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this is so hauntingly beautiful and poignant...
and has such a self-revealing honesty, I am awed by the splendour of the temples, and the depth of your spirit.
posted by
Ciel
on May 5, 2011 at 2:22 PM
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