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Beautiful. I love that smell of the very first drops of rain after a long dry spell.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 22, 2011 at 7:40 PM
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posted by
Nita09
on May 22, 2011 at 4:43 AM
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This reminded me of a scene
from David Copperfield, off of the coat of Yarmouth
posted by
malcolm
on May 22, 2011 at 2:38 AM
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Sinome...
posted by
BC-A
on May 21, 2011 at 11:12 PM
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-Z Write a poem with eyes, senses, and feelings like you do love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 21, 2011 at 11:12 PM
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thanks for your kind comment and bless you dear one!
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 21, 2011 at 9:24 PM
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You capture the emotions so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 21, 2011 at 5:54 PM
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I expect this illustrates
how one might feel when the ground is parched and the crops are dying how can we change things we have so little power. An interesting poem Simone
posted by
C_C_T
on May 21, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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G-d is the Jewish way to write G-d... are you? you're a good poet.
very good.
posted by
poet_prophetess
on May 21, 2011 at 6:35 AM
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