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Poetess Raye, the zeal of summer and all it brings. Your poem here is full of spirit and Life. Wonderful! Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 26, 2011 at 11:04 AM
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Wonderful Summer Raye.
posted by
shobana
on June 22, 2011 at 3:11 PM
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Summer time and we have all been waiting so long it seems.
posted by
Kabu
on June 22, 2011 at 2:09 PM
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Ah yes, it's a wonderful feeling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 22, 2011 at 11:26 AM
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~
sigh ~
posted by
Troosha
on June 22, 2011 at 9:11 AM
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Gorgeous resonance and imagery, this is a very full and powerful poem and I like it very much
posted by
lionreign
on June 22, 2011 at 7:58 AM
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NO You hit summer love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 22, 2011 at 7:18 AM
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Well Raye I had to lift a few layers of thought to realise the picture in this. I wish I could paint.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 22, 2011 at 12:31 AM
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Raye09
Lovely welcome to first day of summer luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 21, 2011 at 5:47 PM
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Happy first summer day to you, too! The heat has come about in my desert and I am enjoying because it will be gone before we know it! I liked wrapping up the poem with resounding, it gave it real impetus and enhanced the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 21, 2011 at 5:25 PM
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