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I like to re-work - revise and I appreciate it as a writer --- Your thoughts are so filled with wisdom here actually. I say

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- Lovely indeed - and from the heart. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on June 26, 2011 at 6:06 PM
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It's looking good, I say.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 22, 2011 at 11:28 AM
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I will read any and everything that you write dear one
i need to do the same as you...some Polishing and Blogit is a great place to do just that.
posted by
Kabu
on June 22, 2011 at 9:03 AM
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I think this poem has been polished to a beautiful gem; loved it! xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on June 22, 2011 at 7:29 AM
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Sinome
NO It makes me think that memory’s like the wind. It reminds me love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 22, 2011 at 7:21 AM
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Yes Simone I think it is a good idea, One can tighten things up and it is better to have a select bundle. I don't mind reading anything again especially with afterthought, well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 22, 2011 at 12:42 AM
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Very timely for me at this point in my life
Very well said.
posted by
skye08
on June 21, 2011 at 8:48 PM
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