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nice to read you again.
posted by
_Symphony_
on July 14, 2011 at 12:11 PM
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Re: Raye09
Well stated, WileyFriend - Thank you..

posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:28 PM
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I believe so too, FSI.
posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:27 PM
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Thanks so much, Dear Sam!
posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:27 PM
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Thank you so much, Bill - really appreciate that critique! and I'm glad the surgery is over and you are on the mend. Take care of yourself.
posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:26 PM
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Re: Re: Oh CHIFFCHAFF dear friend it is not to do with worthiness
Well said, Dear Kabu!

posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:25 PM
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Very interesting musing, CC! Well, my belief system tells me He is my Creator and that I also have free will - He is the original Liberator - so it is my choice to strive towards betterment of soul. Here and elsewhere. But I believe He loves me not matter what - His the original, unconditional Love too. This is what I hold as
my truth.
posted by
Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 9:24 PM
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Raye09
I have a dispensation from the God of my understanding, to leave all those problems I can't solve alone, He will solve them. I do believe that church and state should be separate however.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 8, 2011 at 8:06 PM
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Yes, the entire world was created by God.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 8, 2011 at 7:24 PM
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Your closing stanza should prompt discussion! I don't get into that area but I can see others doing it! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 8, 2011 at 1:41 PM
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Raye09
Þ After surgery I’m alright but do you mind if I comment on the literature? Your writing technique in the last verse’s very clever and creative I think. In terms of writing poems, it makes an effective analogy of God, the mottos, and governments love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 8, 2011 at 9:51 AM
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Re: Oh CHIFFCHAFF dear friend it is not to do with worthiness
if that were the case the creator would have turned its back forever ago. God loves his creation and leaves us to learn and to grow at our own pace. ...towards love...you I know are filled with love you have such a wonderful heart.
posted by
Kabu
on July 8, 2011 at 9:08 AM
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Are we worthy of a God that's what I wonder sometimes Ray.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 8, 2011 at 8:53 AM
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Excellent and wise observation, truth, Lionreign! Thank You. It is good to see those with reason and intelligence understand what I'm hoping to convey. There are some who write me and my views off as the Devil's own voice, lol...
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Raye09
on July 8, 2011 at 8:12 AM
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Good questions very well said! I tend to feel that mixing governance with religion lessens both a little but religion the more - after all who can govern and still remain pure? I can't think of a single leader who's succeeded
posted by
lionreign
on July 8, 2011 at 6:42 AM
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