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Very good work, Marta!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 15, 2011 at 11:03 AM
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Sinome
If I may say so, your beautifully sad poem did give your mind some release by allowing us to share in your
heart. G-d Bless you lovin' lady, and hold you in the palm of His Hand.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 13, 2011 at 9:13 PM
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I don't know what to say to this sad and beautiful poem except
posted by
Justi
on July 13, 2011 at 3:17 PM
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Poems can very much become about the poet.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 13, 2011 at 11:58 AM
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darling the sadness and aloneness screams out in this poem...how hard
it must be to write .... you write so beautifully, these poems are a book to comfort others who are experiencing loss....such a dear soul that you are.
posted by
Kabu
on July 13, 2011 at 10:20 AM
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I wrote three times and deleted Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 13, 2011 at 10:18 AM
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I loved it too!
posted by
shamasehar
on July 13, 2011 at 10:02 AM
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a poem about the slow walk of a lonely soul that cries
and the sadness of the one that carries Autumn rains in his eyes
so many emotions, so many great lines, I loved it, thanks
posted by
Riversidepoet
on July 13, 2011 at 9:22 AM
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Sinome
» At least your writing’s there for those temporal things love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 13, 2011 at 8:23 AM
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this is you at your melancholy best, well done sweetie xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on July 13, 2011 at 7:44 AM
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