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Very thought provoking...the words and the imagery woven together
posted by
Whisperer4U
on July 31, 2011 at 6:02 AM
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I know how memories can still speak, and at times they shout! Wonderful poem of imagery laden when things seemingly end in the physical but linger in the mental! I liked how the speaker qualified the imagery with their take on it too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM
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Profound
and really made me think. Thanks
posted by
malcolm
on July 30, 2011 at 12:58 AM
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Raye09
{ Beautiful moments. Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on July 29, 2011 at 10:19 PM
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Re: Nice work as always, Raye...
Thank you, Ted...
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:57 PM
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Re: a wonderful read poet Queen.
Deeply appreciated, Dear Kabu..
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:56 PM
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Yes, indeed, FSI..Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM
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Thank you kindly, CC...
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:55 PM
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Much appreciated, Jay..
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:54 PM
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Thanks, Bill..
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:54 PM
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Thank you, TAPS..
posted by
Raye09
on July 29, 2011 at 2:53 PM
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Nice work as always, Raye...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 29, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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a wonderful read poet Queen.
posted by
Kabu
on July 29, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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Those memories will remain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 29, 2011 at 10:42 AM
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Yes sadly so Raye better to let it float out and make it beautiful
posted by
C_C_T
on July 29, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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Sadness beautifuly brought to the reader...nice work Raye.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 29, 2011 at 10:05 AM
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Y The lines put sounds into memories love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on July 29, 2011 at 2:57 AM
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Definitely a great read. I am lingering over it and thinking about it.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 29, 2011 at 12:02 AM
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