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Raye09
these yearnings begging me
hold and save
knowing I am not alone
giving un-judgementally is a height
many do roam ¸ And we roam for the good then love. BC-A, Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on August 12, 2011 at 8:50 AM
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Thank you so much, Leslie.
posted by
Raye09
on August 4, 2011 at 8:24 AM
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Well Raye we are human that is the problem. We are programmed obviously to survive now and again someone is brave enough to question our frailty or even try to define a reason why we are not better than we should be. I don't know the answer.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 4, 2011 at 8:09 AM
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Raye09
Nothing bogus about you or your emotions luv. I loved the; "Creator who released us free and prays we find our ways..............." You are quite a wonderful work of that Creator my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 3, 2011 at 7:39 PM
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you feel deeply you have great compassion even as you suffer yourself
you cry for the pain of others and remain their voice in the wilderness. I am a fan.
posted by
Kabu
on August 3, 2011 at 5:20 PM
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You paint with words.
You make music with feeling.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 3, 2011 at 4:06 PM
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You are not bogus...you are very sensitive, compansionate soul. Let go of your fear...it is your albatross
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 3, 2011 at 3:15 PM
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Unfortunately so, FSI and if only they could see Truth and Love, unconditional and pure are the journeys fulfilling peace. Thanks for commenting.
posted by
Raye09
on August 3, 2011 at 1:03 PM
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Yes, Faith/belief in a greater good is the guide steadying our stumbles - and sincere be that hand. Thank you, Jay...
posted by
Raye09
on August 3, 2011 at 12:59 PM
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Fear has guided many a person...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 3, 2011 at 11:39 AM
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I wonder the same thing from time to time and in the end rely on faith as do you I know...another beautiful poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 3, 2011 at 10:11 AM
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