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This is awesome! I love the conclusion of the poem! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 15, 2011 at 12:01 AM
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This is awesome! I love the conclusion of the poem! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 15, 2011 at 12:01 AM
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What a fun day you describe to us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 14, 2011 at 1:07 PM
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I love it. What fun.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 14, 2011 at 11:39 AM
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Well this could be quite a simple exercise one day when people develop more awareness.
You could have chosen a better situation though. perhaps a tropical Island for a start and gradually increase your hubby's perception. Quite good fun
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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Myrrhage
I simply admired and loved the cadence of your beauty of a poem. That P.S. 'Bring oxygen' was classic! Such talents around here ... I am filled with wonder!!!
posted by
anib
on August 14, 2011 at 7:01 AM
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An exhalant and fun read...well thought.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 14, 2011 at 6:13 AM
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Very good! Loved the flow and fun of this poem!
posted by
Ariala
on August 14, 2011 at 5:25 AM
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