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Sinome
w Just take it all in love. Bill’s R{{st
posted by
BC-A
on August 21, 2011 at 5:14 AM
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Oh so wonderful. Only a handful in all the world can tell the story daily without talking the words of news but with the words of love and privacy. Oh how richly beautiful.
posted by
Justi
on August 21, 2011 at 4:34 AM
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The ending makes this poem touchingly classic. Me so delighted
, princess Marta xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on August 21, 2011 at 3:39 AM
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That last stanza said so much so succinctly....
posted by
Straightforward
on August 20, 2011 at 9:18 PM
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This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it...very thought provoking
posted by
UtahJay
on August 20, 2011 at 7:55 PM
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A truth beautifully expressed. Well done!
posted by
adnohr
on August 20, 2011 at 7:50 PM
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Beautiful and so very true
I really like this one. It says it all.
posted by
skye08
on August 20, 2011 at 6:54 PM
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Sinome
Yes indeed, my cousin Tom had a tear on his face right after he died.It said so much, and I think it was because he'd given up on God by 74 years old. He had been an engineer all his life, very bright and successful. Your poem just hit me with the sadness of that luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 20, 2011 at 2:32 PM
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It tells us a lot.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 20, 2011 at 1:02 PM
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Oh Oh you have said so much here....how sad and how true this is.
posted by
Kabu
on August 20, 2011 at 12:37 PM
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