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Re: Excellent...
Thank you, Raintree..
posted by
Raye09
on September 8, 2011 at 6:14 PM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet52
on September 8, 2011 at 5:04 PM
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Re: Raye09
Thanks, Bill.
posted by
Raye09
on September 8, 2011 at 11:16 AM
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Raye09
J You get to know your feelings love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 7, 2011 at 9:23 PM
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Re: Very nice and vivid, Dear Raye!
You're welcome, Birthday Girl! And Thank You..
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 7:38 PM
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Thank you, Jay.
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 7:38 PM
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Thanks so much, Dear Sam - I really appreciate the critique!
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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Thank you, TAPS..
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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Very nice and vivid, Dear Raye!
Thank you so much for the birthday wishes, sweet friend!
I hope all is well with you
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on September 7, 2011 at 6:43 PM
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You are a fabulous poet Raye, the weather is fine.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 7, 2011 at 6:13 PM
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I liked how the poem remained consistent with the variations of the weather, from clouds to sun but I had to read it a couple of times because I could not decide which of the two words that caught my eye manifested the poem if you will! I liked how vicissitudes gave impetus to the vagaries and then melange a potpourri, then I just decided it was a dead heat so to speak because they truly were both most effective in keeping the continuity of the poem! So, I say bravo to you Dear Raye, bravo indeed! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 7, 2011 at 1:24 PM
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You have such a way with words when you are writing poetry.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 7, 2011 at 10:45 AM
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Yes and so are the conceptions and effects, FSI. Thank you.
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM
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Much appreciated, Shobana.
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 10:37 AM
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Thanks CC!
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 10:36 AM
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The weather is so amazing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 7, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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Wonderful poem Raye..good job.
posted by
shobana
on September 6, 2011 at 11:55 PM
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Whow the original Weather Girl this would get them thinking Raye. Inclement maybe.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 6, 2011 at 11:45 PM
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