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You are most welcome, Raye...
posted by
teddypoet52
on September 15, 2011 at 7:41 PM
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How truly painful it is to lose someone we care about deeply
The sadness of loss is so profound.. yet without it, we would never realize the bliss of the things we had/have/will have.
Lovely work, as always, Dear Raye
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on September 15, 2011 at 6:15 PM
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the angst of the world
weighed unto
missing you
tumbled out strange,
but Love is always
in range
of mine words
they make sense
to me...
(mostly..:)
Thank You...
posted by
Raye09
on September 15, 2011 at 6:10 PM
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posted by
teddypoet52
on September 15, 2011 at 5:40 PM
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Very haunting...almost Shakespearean
posted by
Whisperer4U
on September 15, 2011 at 4:47 PM
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It seems to be so; awesome imagery throughout, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 13, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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Raye
No question the content is extremely poignant but your style was breath-taking (took me back to another era).
posted by
Troosha
on September 13, 2011 at 4:41 PM
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A terrible realization to have, that one is not coming back.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 13, 2011 at 9:39 AM
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sad sad heart broken poetry yet the end gives hope with a promise
that acceptance comes and a person can go on.
posted by
Kabu
on September 13, 2011 at 9:17 AM
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Sooner or later, it definitely happens to all, and it is never easy for those left behind.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 13, 2011 at 8:30 AM
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About pain and loss and the process of accepting both; kind of a rebirth, so yes, sad. My being fated, it seems. But rebirth is also freeing...well, hopefully..:) Thank you kindly, CC.
posted by
Raye09
on September 13, 2011 at 6:09 AM
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WEll it is digging deep Ray I suppose we mortals always seek the edge of perfection, but we usually fall over that precipice. This is sad poetry but I imagine to some it is what they could never express but only feel. Strong work.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 12, 2011 at 11:55 PM
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