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Great insight, Dear Sam - Thank you..
posted by
Raye09
on November 15, 2011 at 5:44 PM
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Re: you are writing something important dear.
Thank you, Dear Kabu..
posted by
Raye09
on November 15, 2011 at 5:43 PM
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Re: Raye09
Thanks, Bill..
posted by
Raye09
on November 15, 2011 at 5:43 PM
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Nice work, kid!

posted by
teddypoet52
on November 15, 2011 at 3:54 PM
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Don't give up on your dream...finish writing your epic novel. Your words are full of inspiration...just BELIEVE in yourself, and it will BE
posted by
Whisperer4U
on November 15, 2011 at 3:36 PM
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Yes it must have involved a lot of work Raye. I hope one day you will be happy with the outcome, It is quite a wonderful piece.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 15, 2011 at 11:24 AM
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You do such a fine job of conveying the emotions.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 15, 2011 at 9:48 AM
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This is awesome~ having worked for years on an epic I can appreciate the effort one puts into this kind of writing! I always say that poems are never finished only abandoned! So take your time and enjoy the journey! sam 
posted by
sam444
on November 15, 2011 at 9:29 AM
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you are writing something important dear.
posted by
Kabu
on November 15, 2011 at 8:49 AM
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Raye09
Y Excellent! Youthfulness and togetherness go hand in hand for all ages with each other love. The Occupy Wall Street protestors have a legitimate issue on camping gear restrictions. And they aren’t interested in the religious issues of the Middle East in their group financial protest love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on November 15, 2011 at 8:27 AM
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