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I adore the close on this one; so poignant! sam 
posted by
sam444
on November 26, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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No, only in your dreams you devil you. LOL
posted by
Kabu
on November 24, 2011 at 10:17 AM
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Re: Re: Dear C C no, no holiday from Blogit....there are people on their own and
No, only in your dreams you devil you. LOL
posted by
Kabu
on November 24, 2011 at 10:16 AM
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Right Sam I suppose as long as we end up where we think we are going
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 9:24 AM
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A compliment indeed Lion
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 9:22 AM
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I do like how time leads us to a special place, almost without our knowledge it seems then great recognition when the destination is complete! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 24, 2011 at 5:25 AM
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This is superb. i'm off to read it again...
posted by
lionreign
on November 24, 2011 at 3:36 AM
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There goes two of us John, I suppose the ultimate would be to make folk understand what one was saying. Really one should not write for one's own gratification alone. I think you are very good at most things, a gentle critic indeed. As I have said before once one believes that which one has written is good then one does not try to do better.Thank you. Don't look in the mirror too often I find one tends to believe what it shows.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 1:01 AM
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Thank you Fs you soon recovered.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 12:33 AM
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Thank you Whispers , be happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 12:32 AM
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Thank you Jay have a happy day.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 12:30 AM
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Re: Dear C C no, no holiday from Blogit....there are people on their own and
Oh! no Kabu I thought in my wildest that it was a day of rest a day to rest ones head upon the bosom of the fairest milkmaid and sup yogurt .
posted by
C_C_T
on November 24, 2011 at 12:29 AM
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What a wonderful write! I don't know what you said, but I like it--probably because it goes beyond my reasoning abilities. While the title seems to be "fragments", there is a mastery of an inner voice that seems to know about its own order of things, and the thread that is woven seems to speak what is already known, though not readily revealed.
This is the time, the moment, where the poem begins to speak, unraveling the notion of inner-speak, and that's when I start hearing something I feel I can touch but still goes beyond me.
Meanwhile, the inner intention seems to meet its outer form, and it's fitting me like a glove, which is problematic because now I got issues about how I should preceive my realities.
But I got to tell you, I always have a problem when art becomes itself, because I'm not very good at abstract relationships. The last one I tried was mirror, mirror, on the wall, and I don't know who surprised whom .
posted by
jfm32
on November 23, 2011 at 6:57 PM
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I hope that the collection of the fragments pans out.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 23, 2011 at 6:37 PM
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That was so beautiful...you have a romantic soul, my friend
posted by
Whisperer4U
on November 23, 2011 at 4:35 PM
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I like this one CC, but the last two lines give it life.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 23, 2011 at 3:20 PM
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Dear C C no, no holiday from Blogit....there are people on their own and
we have had our thanksgiving and all that stuff.
posted by
Kabu
on November 23, 2011 at 12:49 PM
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