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Well I suppose we deviate sometimes Lion Thank you,
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 9:10 AM
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Re: I can see why "Fred" would "stagger" around through this one, lol! - Ash
He does not like too much excitement Ash.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 9:09 AM
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This is so much fun
posted by
lionreign
on November 29, 2011 at 8:43 AM
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I can see why "Fred" would "stagger" around through this one, lol! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 29, 2011 at 8:18 AM
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Troosha Thank you, magic must have been in the air
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:37 AM
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Well I suppose that is not old these days Jay. You should see the mother.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:33 AM
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Well Whispers a lovely thought, perhaps I was sitting next to Mum. 
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:30 AM
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I have known them Sam staggering on into or beyond and still looking happy.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:28 AM
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Re: C.C....one is never to old to dream....
RUMOR That is all that ever shows up.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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Re: I love your dialogue poetry....such a slow courtship....the mother probably
Kabu Well Mothers may might wish the daughter would go to the pub and she could deal with the young man.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:24 AM
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Taps I had to assume it was how Mable would feel any ideas.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:21 AM
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Re: The three people in the poem create an interesting situation, though
Fred is cautious Bob he might have to have a bath every fortnight.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 29, 2011 at 7:19 AM
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The three people in the poem create an interesting situation, though
the mother's and the daughter's attitudes seem to suggest that Fred ought to see what Gladys or Trudy is doing tonight. But isn't that the way it happens? - it's Mabel or no one! - Bob
posted by
2902
on November 29, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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Love it. How fun!
posted by
TAPS.
on November 28, 2011 at 7:16 PM
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I love your dialogue poetry....such a slow courtship....the mother probably
is wishing that they would just get on with it so that she can get off down to that pub for her Stout.
posted by
Kabu
on November 28, 2011 at 5:44 PM
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C.C....one is never to old to dream....
As long as a chaperone doesn't show up in your dream.
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posted by
Rumor
on November 28, 2011 at 3:59 PM
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I adored how the age and the chaperone gave life to this poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 28, 2011 at 2:40 PM
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I agree with UtahJay's comment...your words almost make it feel so very real, and almost like we are eavesdropping
posted by
Whisperer4U
on November 28, 2011 at 2:30 PM
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Most likely only has dreams to excite her. I like your back and forth poems where conversation lives forever.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 28, 2011 at 1:11 PM
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As a daughter of fourty four, with a mother as a chaperone...
posted by
UtahJay
on November 28, 2011 at 1:09 PM
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Well, their thinking isn't too far apart. A fun read, CC!
posted by
Troosha
on November 28, 2011 at 12:43 PM
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