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I had the same thought as FSI! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 13, 2011 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply

Life is short CCT, go for a ride in her RR.

posted by UtahJay on December 10, 2011 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

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But has she got the chassis Wiley

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 5:57 AM | link to this | reply

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Hi Doc sadly martyrs are nor really in vogue it is thought to be in their makeup which is far from the truth. 

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This revision is supersuperific

Ms SF, that is a superduper word

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Go for her man, she's got the wheels.

posted by WileyJohn on December 10, 2011 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

Contrasts! For a while I had an aversion to shopping.  I realize now that I needed to shop for others while neglecting self.  Now that I decided to change the focus, it is great.  Others now have the indigestion, while I am getting more of the needs and wants!

posted by Dr_JPT on December 10, 2011 at 1:25 AM | link to this | reply

This revision is supersuperific

posted by Straightforward on December 10, 2011 at 1:22 AM | link to this | reply

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Seems it is my fate these days FS> Thank you. 

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 12:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: those indigestion tablets come in handy, especially at this time of year..

Or a little help climbing into the Range Rover,Rumour

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

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Well John I have tried that but the concentration factor is so short that one has to clip poems to enable then to stand on their own. John believe me it is a job to rustle up a small poem each day but if I stop I might go pop. When I retire, if I am not banned, I will certainly try your advice. I do usually if I remember note how many look at a blog not worrying too much about the clicks. Thank you

posted by C_C_T on December 10, 2011 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

Have you thought about the diff beteen a poem ans short story? I understand your choice of venue, but I can almost here the other way.You have the gift of making situations and characters come alive. A short story form might reach a wider audience--and you would only be embelishing, and not sacraficing anything--just a thought.

posted by jfm32 on December 9, 2011 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

those indigestion tablets come in handy, especially at this time of year..

C_C_T, she sounds like she has both feet firmly on the ground..perhaps all she needs is a little help keeping that sunny side of her shining...

posted by Rumor on December 9, 2011 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

Each action relates so well to one another in this poem, I feel.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 9, 2011 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply