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Yes get it out of your system Laurine and it makes poetry

 

posted by C_C_T on January 17, 2012 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Your poem ends with the word "insignificance" yet I feel the weight of this piece is much deeper than that, you hide your pain clearly between the lines like great poets do...well done.

posted by UtahJay on January 16, 2012 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

I would call that a vigorous ta-ta!

posted by 2902 on January 16, 2012 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply