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I have experienced that emotion before where I thought someone was the world and all it entailed and then after they were no longer in my life I wonder why I had thought how I did in the beginning! You captured this experience very well! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 27, 2012 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

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FS Afraid so sometimes one cannot beat the beat of the heart sadly it is only a muscle.

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2012 at 12:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Great conclusion!

Hi Bob did the second poetry comp.,burn out?

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2012 at 12:49 AM | link to this | reply

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Hi Jay, I am not such a prolific writer as yourself. More of as sleeper these days.

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2012 at 12:46 AM | link to this | reply

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I suppose so Bil, l you are always optimistic

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2012 at 12:44 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful! ... thank you

Shams-i- Heartsong Thank you Sir.

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2012 at 12:41 AM | link to this | reply

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e Sometimes an ellipsis (an omission of time between dates)  helps sir.  Bill’s Hot Poems       

posted by BC-A on January 26, 2012 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Great conclusion!

posted by 2902 on January 26, 2012 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, sometimes a poem is enough, and sometimes you must write two, or a thousand and two. I am so happy to have you back on poetry, I have missed your poetry so.

posted by UtahJay on January 26, 2012 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes a poem is all we have...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 26, 2012 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful! ... thank you

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on January 26, 2012 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply