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Brilliant - I especially liked the last metaphor
posted by
lionreign
on February 9, 2012 at 4:10 AM
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CCT
This poem is disturbing so early in the morning! I had planned to luxuriate in bed for another fifteen or so, (the laptop propped up in my lap), but you force me to check my heartbeat (it's okay!) and than whisk me off to Egypt were I'd rather not go at the moment...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 9, 2012 at 3:55 AM
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This is a fascinating poem -the imagery really took me on an
interesting trip!
posted by
2902
on February 9, 2012 at 2:33 AM
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Lo Sam Thank you, I probably have posted some before, but if I can't remember them, I just go for the easy route. 
posted by
C_C_T
on February 9, 2012 at 12:22 AM
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Thank you Jay, did you go back to work?
posted by
C_C_T
on February 9, 2012 at 12:19 AM
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Re: my goodness, what a welcome back, two of the best...what a champ you are!
Kabu I threw the towel in long ago.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 9, 2012 at 12:17 AM
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my goodness, what a welcome back, two of the best...what a champ you are!
posted by
Kabu
on February 8, 2012 at 9:58 PM
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I agree with Sam, the last stanza was genius.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 8, 2012 at 5:49 PM
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Another close that captured me! This was superb! You posted two very fine poems today my dear CC! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2012 at 4:35 PM
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