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Re: UtahJay

Careful, some of them can be a little bitter   Thanks

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Thank you

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Whisperer4U

Thank you so much

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you so much, my friend

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

I hope the sadness didn't remain for long

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I have experienced short intense relationships....Oh not necessarily

Thanks Kabu, I did intend this to cover all kinds of relationships so I am glad you feel that way

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bittersweet, that's the word I was looking for. (One of them, anyway.

thanks so much Bob, I'm delighted that you enjoyed this one

posted by lionreign on February 15, 2012 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

That is where the fish I catch come from...Great poem.

posted by UtahJay on February 14, 2012 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on February 14, 2012 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

Your words are full of wisdom, and truth about relationships.  May the lion always reign...Happy Valentine's Day

posted by Whisperer4U on February 14, 2012 at 6:24 PM | link to this | reply

How utterly expressive! Although melancholy it is outstanding imagery! I am absolutely mesmerized by this one! AWESOME! What a great piece of work! I took a different approach to a poem I posted today and it is cool to see another poet do the same! I love it when we step out of our comfort zone! sam 

posted by sam444 on February 14, 2012 at 1:08 PM | link to this | reply

Your poem brought sadness to my heart for certain people that I know, like my BIL and like lustorlove's daughter.

posted by TAPS. on February 14, 2012 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

I have experienced short intense relationships....Oh not necessarily

sexual sometimes with a woamn friend...this poem describes to perfection. What a wonderful mind you have. Yes, I am a Lion fan!

posted by Kabu on February 14, 2012 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Bittersweet, that's the word I was looking for. (One of them, anyway.

Your poem's wonderful in ways I'm having trouble describing.) 

posted by 2902 on February 14, 2012 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

This is really elegantly said and depicts an important fact about

relationships.  The comparison that immediately jumped to mind was one of my all-time favorite Broadway lyrics, Send in the Clowns!

posted by 2902 on February 14, 2012 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply