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Re: UtahJay
Careful, some of them can be a little bitter
Thanks
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:31 AM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:28 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:27 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you so much, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:21 AM
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Re: TAPS
I hope the sadness didn't remain for long
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:19 AM
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Re: I have experienced short intense relationships....Oh not necessarily
Thanks Kabu, I did intend this to cover all kinds of relationships so I am glad you feel that way
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:17 AM
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Re: Bittersweet, that's the word I was looking for. (One of them, anyway.
thanks so much Bob, I'm delighted that you enjoyed this one
posted by
lionreign
on February 15, 2012 at 3:12 AM
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That is where the fish I catch come from...Great poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 14, 2012 at 10:32 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on February 14, 2012 at 10:07 PM
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Your words are full of wisdom, and truth about relationships. May the lion always reign...Happy Valentine's Day

posted by
Whisperer4U
on February 14, 2012 at 6:24 PM
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How utterly expressive! Although melancholy it is outstanding imagery! I am absolutely mesmerized by this one! AWESOME! What a great piece of work! I took a different approach to a poem I posted today and it is cool to see another poet do the same! I love it when we step out of our comfort zone! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 14, 2012 at 1:08 PM
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Your poem brought sadness to my heart for certain people that I know, like my BIL and like lustorlove's daughter.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 14, 2012 at 12:10 PM
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I have experienced short intense relationships....Oh not necessarily
sexual sometimes with a woamn friend...this poem describes to perfection. What a wonderful mind you have. Yes, I am a Lion fan!
posted by
Kabu
on February 14, 2012 at 9:51 AM
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Bittersweet, that's the word I was looking for. (One of them, anyway.
Your poem's wonderful in ways I'm having trouble describing.)
posted by
2902
on February 14, 2012 at 5:17 AM
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This is really elegantly said and depicts an important fact about
relationships. The comparison that immediately jumped to mind was one of my all-time favorite Broadway lyrics, Send in the Clowns!
posted by
2902
on February 14, 2012 at 4:52 AM
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