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Re: Dancers
thanks 2Philomena
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 4:11 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks abanerjee, I wanted to keep an air o romance and mystery in this poem and imagery seemed the best way...
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:55 AM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:52 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill!
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:51 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you so much, I'm delighted that it worked for you
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:46 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Perhaps... or maybe a faster dance tune...
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:42 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:39 AM
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Re: such passion in this dance, wonderful writing dear friend.
Thanks Kabu, I think that's what dance is about, isn't it?
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:37 AM
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Re: C_C_T
thanks, I thought most people could think of better tunes than I would
posted by
lionreign
on March 2, 2012 at 3:28 AM
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Dancers
Superb, spicy rhythm and imagery.
posted by
2Philomena
on February 28, 2012 at 4:48 PM
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lionreign
Excellent use of metaphors in this poem - "In the spotlight of his desire was silhouetted the moment when their passions were freed".
posted by
anib
on February 27, 2012 at 11:18 PM
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nice movement
posted by
Annicita
on February 27, 2012 at 9:04 PM
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lionreign
Nice shadow play. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 27, 2012 at 11:13 AM
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This is awesome, the imagery seems to come alive and I love that in a poem! KUDOS! sam 
posted by
sam444
on February 27, 2012 at 9:24 AM
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I agree with CCT, maybe a nice slow tune.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 27, 2012 at 9:12 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on February 27, 2012 at 9:02 AM
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such passion in this dance, wonderful writing dear friend.
posted by
Kabu
on February 27, 2012 at 7:44 AM
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Wow one of my favorites watching of course, pity you could not put sound on.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 27, 2012 at 6:57 AM
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