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Re: lovelyladymonk
Thank you - glad you enjoyed it
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lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 5:08 AM
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Re: Nita09
thank you
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 5:07 AM
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Re: lion, so easily pictured in the minds eye...
Thanks Rumor, I'm glad you could see it
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 5:04 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, it always seems to be a ford..
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 4:58 AM
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Re: UtahJay
True... in some ways everything changes and yet nothing does
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 4:56 AM
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Re: C_C_T
At the very least a connection with the world around him
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 4:45 AM
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Re: very good. You paint such a picture, a scene from real life that can be
Thanks Kabu, in many ways I am disappointed by this country and this poem was a reflection of that
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 4:26 AM
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Re: sam444
thank you - it's not often I write so much metaphor in one place so I am pleased it worked.
posted by
lionreign
on March 14, 2012 at 4:02 AM
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Some great imagery for this piece lion. Cheers!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on March 9, 2012 at 8:25 AM
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Well written! Thanks for your note!
posted by
Nita09
on March 9, 2012 at 8:07 AM
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lion, so easily pictured in the minds eye...
and one can almost smell the belch of black smoke and hear the childrens' jeering laughter...very emotive....
posted by
Rumor
on March 9, 2012 at 6:07 AM
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lionreign
Y Nor Ford. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 8, 2012 at 4:55 PM
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And yet nothing remains the same. I really liked this one Lion.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 8, 2012 at 9:58 AM
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Very emotive Lion, what does man sacrifice to own a car.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 8, 2012 at 7:45 AM
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very good. You paint such a picture, a scene from real life that can be
bleak sometimes.
posted by
Kabu
on March 8, 2012 at 7:30 AM
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Things do seem to stay the same at times! What emotive imagery, I could see the Ford and the children taking a pause! The word choice was superlative, too! OUTSTANDING! sam 
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2012 at 6:38 AM
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