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LOL!
I can't tolerate fake cream in my coffee...actually I can't tolerate anything richer than 2% milk in my coffee.
Isn't it funny how our tastes change?
posted by
Bel_Marshall
on April 10, 2012 at 10:09 AM
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Thanks so much everyone!!! Your comments mean so much to me!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 22, 2012 at 6:03 AM
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i bet you wrote this poem as you sipped your coffee with the fake cream.....
...lovey piece dear poet....
posted by
icedlatte
on March 21, 2012 at 2:01 AM
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This is GOOD! I love the layers of emotion and meaning that you have woven into it
posted by
lionreign
on March 19, 2012 at 5:35 AM
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Ah I missed you darlin' this is superb and I had a coffee late
tonight, so seems I will be browsing Blogit for some hours to come!!!! I drink mine black and bitter.
posted by
Kabu
on March 18, 2012 at 8:11 PM
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Hi Hazel,
Simple but illustrative. I missed reading your stuff. Stay well.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on March 18, 2012 at 5:52 AM
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Hazel...
I like it a lot! Sets a tone and imparts a feeling. Very well done.
posted by
food4thought
on March 17, 2012 at 10:28 PM
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Very well written .. You can sense the lonliness! 
posted by
BrightIrish
on March 17, 2012 at 12:52 PM
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You capture the feeling of being alone so well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 17, 2012 at 12:22 PM
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never have nor will I drink coffee the few times I tried it gave me the gitters, I am gittery enough already
but cute poem
posted by
Lanetay
on March 17, 2012 at 11:07 AM
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Re:
awwwwwwwwwwwwww HUGS!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 17, 2012 at 9:06 AM
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Re: wow..thanks so much, UtahJay. That's a beautiful compliment.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 17, 2012 at 9:06 AM
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| Dunkin Donuts here brought back crème puffs that I love after I was diagnosed with diabetes. You might like Munchkins love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 17, 2012 at 7:31 AM
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I read this poem over and over and each time I feel a little deeper and deeper into it. It is truly a wonderful piece, and when I am done typing out this comment I will go back and read it again...Somehow it touches me.
posted by
UtahJay
on March 16, 2012 at 5:32 PM
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Re: Thanks, Sammie, Love!!!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 12:07 PM
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I liked how you tied in the memories and the effects of too much real sugar! I drink mine black, always have, always will cuz, it's about coffee for me and not the additivies that could cause me to be unable to button of my jeans, too! This was a delightful read! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 16, 2012 at 11:34 AM
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Re: Fake sugar
hi Whacky and Bo!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 11:21 AM
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Fake sugar
aka sweet n low is good too! 
posted by
Whacky
on March 16, 2012 at 11:17 AM
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Re: Thanks, so much adnohr. One word makes a hell of a difference. :-)
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 11:15 AM
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And I guess the 'alone' was added before I came in here....so I went back to read it to see the difference. Good move - very nice poem, especially for someone with writer's block!
posted by
adnohr
on March 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM
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Re: Hazel
Thanks, Naut!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 11:05 AM
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Re: LOL TAPS Thank you!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 11:05 AM
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I'm drumming my fingers and drinking black coffee.
Good to see you back.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 16, 2012 at 11:04 AM
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Re: Wow!
I agree, Pat, alone..yep. Thanks!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 16, 2012 at 10:35 AM
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Wow!
I'd add one word. "alone." "but now here I am, alone, drinking coffee..."
I love the way you used coffee as symbolic of communion. Write on. 
posted by
Pat_B
on March 16, 2012 at 10:34 AM
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Hazel
Very well done! 
posted by
Nautikos
on March 16, 2012 at 10:03 AM
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