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posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on June 13, 2012 at 1:47 PM
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How very true on the close, and the quicker one realizes it the better off they become! Almost magical as it were! Strong imagery throughout, too! sam 
posted by
sam444
on May 17, 2012 at 11:22 PM
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Katray2
I His love’s the ray love. BC-A, Bill’s R®s
posted by
BC-A
on May 15, 2012 at 10:36 PM
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Beautifully written thoughts on a complex enduring love!
posted by
BrightIrish
on May 15, 2012 at 5:44 PM
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writing and when you have the talent that you so obviously and
always do have, is such a wonderful way to clarify a given situation for oneself. well done dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on May 15, 2012 at 2:20 PM
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Katray2
I see the difficulties of broken relationship perhaps over the introduction of a third party to lives, and how it does work out leaving lovers free but with some regret or apology. Well I'm not that talented at deciphering such poetic creativity, but I love that your here writing my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 15, 2012 at 11:23 AM
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You capture the feelings in ther relationship so well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 15, 2012 at 10:04 AM
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Still got the buzz factor Ray. Knuckle bone stuff that is no doubt what you need.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 15, 2012 at 4:00 AM
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we created dreams, tattooed them
over empty skin
and hoped renewal ....... WOW, You're very good, sweet lady!!!!
posted by
Troosha
on May 14, 2012 at 11:34 PM
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Re:
Yes it is and writing about both is difficult but cleansing...Thank you for reading..
posted by
Katray2
on May 14, 2012 at 10:05 PM
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What a complex relationship
posted by
calia14
on May 14, 2012 at 9:58 PM
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