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Re: sam444

thanks

posted by lionreign on June 28, 2012 at 3:10 AM | link to this | reply

It is about perception for me, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on June 27, 2012 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

I thought I'd leave the ending to the reader... I find that I often dislike definite endings to things :D

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobana

Sometimes things are better than before... and others  provide new options for growth

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay

thank you

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: BC-A

and now with text:  Aren't they all?  some are just more noticably so

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

thank you

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 3:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Eleanor_Jazz

Thank you, it can be a tricky situation sometimes can't it?

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 3:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: excellent and brought nicely to a close. I agree with the sentiments

Thanks Kabu, I wasn't sure if that came through, so I am delighted to see you pick out that point

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

That is true...  everything is in the preception...  no misionary work, I just had some friends visiting from Thailand and had no time to get online

posted by lionreign on June 25, 2012 at 3:01 AM | link to this | reply

hope to see an additional verse where they are back together

posted by Annicita on June 23, 2012 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderfully stated as always Lion. Sometimes we part ways and come back expecting things to be the same as before and if it is - it is sort of a wish come true I guess.

posted by shobana on June 23, 2012 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

I like the way you worked through this one, a nice read.

posted by UtahJay on June 22, 2012 at 11:39 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

The relationship’s up in the air. BC-A Bill”s R®st

posted by BC-A on June 22, 2012 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

That was excellent my friend....

posted by WileyJohn on June 22, 2012 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

This poem, I like... for it describes the situation I am in now.

posted by Eleanor_Jazz on June 22, 2012 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

excellent and brought nicely to a close. I agree with the sentiments

fulfilled people do make for healthier relationship partners.

posted by Kabu on June 22, 2012 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

Probably Lion sometimes things are better viewed from a different angle. Thought you had gone off to be a missionary

posted by C_C_T on June 22, 2012 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply