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This is a very vivid scene. I like how you are able to get the reader hooked in so few words
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lionreign
on July 2, 2012 at 3:05 AM
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I like where this is going, the uncontrollable mind at work! sam 
posted by
sam444
on July 1, 2012 at 4:36 PM
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