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Brought on the thoughts of clouds with a spectrum of blue..lovely imagery here Raye.
posted by
shobana
on July 29, 2012 at 4:52 AM
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I can see that.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 28, 2012 at 4:45 PM
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Nice work, Raye!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 27, 2012 at 2:21 PM
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I agree with the others. I do find this haiku better and smooth when read. I never fond of haiku, but I like yours very much.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on July 27, 2012 at 9:58 AM
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You write a fine haiku.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 27, 2012 at 9:39 AM
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Well done Ray it is not easy to place the right words to form a picture.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 27, 2012 at 12:02 AM
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haiku
This is a wonderful use of the form, expressing the beauty and changing shapes! Each line shifts - great!
posted by
2902
on July 26, 2012 at 8:20 PM
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As far as my knowledge of Haiku goes - this one was perfect!
posted by
Troosha
on July 26, 2012 at 6:27 PM
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This reminds me of the view of Mt. Borah in Idaho and how I perceive it at times! Well done, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2012 at 3:06 PM
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