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Decider poem
There is a decision, here. The speaker gallops on. Read aloud, one is not allowed to stop (or make a Decision) until the horse finishes his final dance, er.. prance.

posted by PoeticPoetry on September 20, 2012 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: errata: Would you believe CCT? I don't know sir!

It's something in the water I think Bill probably gin

posted by C_C_T on August 17, 2012 at 7:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: errata: Would you believe CCT? I don't know sir!

posted by BC-A on August 17, 2012 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Corbin Dallas

YCanadian tourism should play up mid August. Your post serves as such in this Middle Atlantic heat of the United States  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on August 17, 2012 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

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Love to hear you reading one Taps.

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 11:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This just gallops along with a feeling of inevitability reminding me of

Of course Bob I'll go halves

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 11:26 PM | link to this | reply

annicita

Thank you A 

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  A great one to read aloud, if one avoids being sing-songy about it.
I like to read poems aloud.

posted by TAPS. on August 16, 2012 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

This just gallops along with a feeling of inevitability reminding me of

The Decider.  One must keep one's fingers crossed, mustn't one!  Is it a good day to go out and buy a lottery ticket, I wonder?

posted by 2902 on August 16, 2012 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

im not very good at rhymning but love this

posted by Annicita on August 16, 2012 at 2:28 PM | link to this | reply

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FS sure thing buddy, it is phenomenal.  

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 10:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re Kabu

Kabu you know I am an old meany, I was going to give you a wine gum, but it has fluff sticking, 

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Bill perhaps it appeals to you as you can pace the movement. 

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2012 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

I find that the Decider has so much power.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 16, 2012 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

The Decider, you have the gifts and the willingness to share them you are a

master poet.

posted by Kabu on August 16, 2012 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

vSir, this is your best poem yet. It’s full with sensation, imagery, and emotion. They’re tied together personally. It’s a great poem! BC-A, Bill’s RJJst

posted by BC-A on August 16, 2012 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply