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i truly enjoy reading your work...good job!
posted by
Annicita
on August 22, 2012 at 8:25 PM
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I felt it a very introspective piece (but then what poetry isn't?). Nice gentle flow into the early signs of autumn.
posted by
Troosha
on August 22, 2012 at 6:35 PM
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I must say that I don't feel as though hell can come "undone" as long as there is heaven under the sun. One must eternally counter the other. Remember, there is no virtue if there is no sin. Just my opinion . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on August 22, 2012 at 2:12 PM
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Here she comes not drifting in love as is her want. She stirs the seasons with a new found power, bonding all to her new destiny.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 22, 2012 at 12:34 PM
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Shobana
The winds chimes are a favourite of mine adding musical notes to your poetry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 22, 2012 at 12:27 PM
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I like the contrast of images here in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 22, 2012 at 10:08 AM
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I look forward to fall havent been here yet when fall started
posted by
Lanetay
on August 22, 2012 at 9:17 AM
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i like this, more powerful words on the Aurumn of our lives than I have
read for a long time.
posted by
Kabu
on August 22, 2012 at 8:12 AM
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shobana
ROther summers I remember the fallen leaves in August. I would name the first one Leafy. This year I haven’t yet. However the past inspires me love. Excellent. BC-A.Bill’s R®st.
posted by
BC-A
on August 22, 2012 at 7:31 AM
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Another very powerful poem Shobana, your talent grows and grows. Thank you so much for you kind remarks today.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 22, 2012 at 12:55 AM
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