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UtahJay
I was always afraid as a kid, The Presentation Brothers of Ireland were beasts......
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 4, 2012 at 7:05 PM
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When I was younger, I used to feel afraid...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 4, 2012 at 11:33 AM
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Revenge is sweet Jay, while so it seems, but this is coming to terms with something that was not your fault, sadly visions persist and in the mix up of emotion one lies in the dark and fear persists. This is all well written and perhaps it will lay the ghost to rest. Good man
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2012 at 8:44 AM
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Very well crafted! I can see where you're coming from, but sometimes I see the night coming, and say "Hullo, old friend". It's a time to let your inhibitions go, and that's what I tell myself when those heebee-jeebeez start creeping up.
posted by
calia14
on September 4, 2012 at 5:18 AM
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UtahJay
ELight’s like a person in your household that leaves and you wait for them to return Jay. Believe it or not it reminds me of my mother in the 90a. BC-A , Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 4, 2012 at 4:45 AM
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This is superb! You handle the moment with perfect sensitivity and great expression, I empathise
posted by
lionreign
on September 4, 2012 at 2:28 AM
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You expressed your feeling very well 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 3, 2012 at 8:53 PM
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Well done! I well remember similar experiences and feelings.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 3, 2012 at 8:00 PM
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"A tender disorder" and "the first taste of light" imply to me that
the first taste of independence was growing sweeter even as the loneliness closed in. As I remember it, that was a tough yet heady time. I liked the poem very much.
posted by
2902
on September 3, 2012 at 6:44 PM
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we are always so brave during the day....we can see clearly around us....night changes the whole picture
posted by
Annicita
on September 3, 2012 at 5:58 PM
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