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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you Chuck
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:23 AM
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Re: JimmyA
I've done it too - it's an easy thing to slip into if you aren't careful. Thanks for reading
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:18 AM
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Re: skye08
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:16 AM
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Re: WileyJohn
No problems, my friend, it's easy to lose track of which page you're commenting on - I've done it
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:12 AM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you, my friend, but this one is very much an exercise in imagery and empathy - I was attempting to put myself in the shoes of somebody I see often on the way to work
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:08 AM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:06 AM
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Re: 2902
Very much so, thank you for your concern
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:03 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks Bill... I think the human nature lions are more common
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 3:01 AM
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Re: C_C_T
I think it's one of those Matrix "there is no spoon" moments - you really just have to understand that there is no cage and find another way.
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 2:51 AM
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Re: TAPS
Gosh, the poor fellow. I hope he was able to forgive himself before the end
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 2:48 AM
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Re: UtahJay
thank you, I have been in the same place, although for less reason
posted by
lionreign
on September 10, 2012 at 2:44 AM
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Good imagination
Have a good weekend.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 7, 2012 at 1:21 PM
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I think some people might call that a form of transference . . . taking out their frustrations on someone else to hide their own anger or despair. I know I've been guilty of that on occasion. Nicely written.
posted by
JimmyA
on September 7, 2012 at 12:08 PM
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Very well written
Very sad.
posted by
skye08
on September 6, 2012 at 9:15 PM
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lionreign
I've had a senior moment my friend and called you Annicita below. I'm not really with it ever. LOL
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 6, 2012 at 6:40 PM
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Annicita
I can certainly see that man in such distress, well written luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 6, 2012 at 6:11 PM
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time to get some help dear friend...we are here for you don't ever forget.
posted by
Kabu
on September 6, 2012 at 5:02 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on September 6, 2012 at 2:31 PM
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A deeply unhappy picture. I hope it's just an exercise.
posted by
2902
on September 6, 2012 at 2:31 PM
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lionreign
RThat’s a lion of the human nature kind not your poet one. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 6, 2012 at 10:23 AM
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You have got to get out of the cage lion, not so easy when one makes the bars themselves, good poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 6, 2012 at 10:10 AM
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I know that man...or did. In his constant rage, he had a stroke, a bad one.
He lived long enough to spend several weeks of "time in a bottle" ruing and wishing.
You are so good at this.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 6, 2012 at 6:59 AM
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This is why I write...It's all I had. Beautiful poem.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 6, 2012 at 5:57 AM
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