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posted by
Annicita
on September 19, 2012 at 2:22 PM
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Writing about your life...
You are so lucky to be ABLE (that you have the skill) to put these experiences down on paper.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 19, 2012 at 12:21 PM
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questions and edits: What is a T and A? not everybody will know what it means...What is a T.W.A. is that twa airlines? first stanza....each in his own world.....consider editing on the last stanza the following
This island paradise
Cast a spell on me
I have cherished for a lifetime
Always longing for that natural beauty
great job...my uncle was in viet nam as a marine but not sure of division or anything...he died already so cant ask him
posted by
Annicita
on September 19, 2012 at 11:46 AM
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I cannot imagine what it was like to experience all of that...What a powerful effort this poem amounted to.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 19, 2012 at 9:05 AM
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You put your soul into this Jay. Well done soldier.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 19, 2012 at 6:38 AM
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I agree with lion - a beautiful and poignant piece of writing!
posted by
adnohr
on September 19, 2012 at 5:21 AM
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that is a wonderful story in a brilliant poem, I applaud you on both counts
posted by
lionreign
on September 19, 2012 at 3:23 AM
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