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quick edits....the sentences you have comma in the middle try flipping the end to the beginning...eg...I stopped in Las Vegas to see my sister who was twenty years my elder on my way to Salt Lake City.
I wished that time could reverse itself
so sad and so sorry that not only that she said that but that you were able to hear it
posted by
Annicita
on September 25, 2012 at 2:00 PM
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UtahJay
TI have experienced this want to go back in time Jay.BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 25, 2012 at 10:00 AM
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Sad it it is when the feeling of love is not reciprocated. You capture the sadness felt so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 25, 2012 at 9:23 AM
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Sad but very nice emotions are expressed 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 25, 2012 at 7:02 AM
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That must have hurt to hear your love so casually dismissed. Wonderful poetry, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on September 25, 2012 at 4:20 AM
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Sadly folk fail to empathise Jay . Whatever One thought and it would seem ridiculous today, you were in need of comfort. Things like this are hard to comprehend. I cam understand how you sought oblivion rather than search for sympathy that was no longer apparent.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 24, 2012 at 11:44 PM
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contagion_publishing
on September 24, 2012 at 11:42 PM
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