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Those first romantic moments make such an impression.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 27, 2012 at 9:22 AM
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Hauntingly lovely, Jay; much enjoyed...
posted by
Katray2
on September 27, 2012 at 7:54 AM
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UtahJay
Faces on the mind can tingle like raindrops Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 27, 2012 at 6:36 AM
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quick edits...take the out of the first line in 2nd stanza...that's it!
oooooooooooo so sad...but i think a warm sad...right?
posted by
Annicita
on September 27, 2012 at 5:18 AM
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So poignantly lovely Utah - great job.
posted by
shobana
on September 27, 2012 at 5:00 AM
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This is enchanting. Great work, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on September 27, 2012 at 4:32 AM
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You brought up memories in such a nice manner 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 27, 2012 at 1:57 AM
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Actually it is a happy poem, at least for me it is.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 26, 2012 at 11:28 PM
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Sad times Jay , try not to get too depressed at least you are writing,
posted by
C_C_T
on September 26, 2012 at 10:53 PM
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