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Main Subject: Snakes Slithering...
"Are you an artist as well?"
Yes, I am artist, philosopher, and 
human being like yourself. Need you ask? I consider anyone "artist" just for making the attempt to express themselves in verse. The reason I was laughing was because you tried to tell both myself and Former Student about your poem, saying that "it slithers" (quite a nice hint
) and we both missed it. So, when I went back to read again, I caught your statement. It surprised me so, I couldn't stop laughing.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 1, 2012 at 9:48 PM
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Yes Shobana they grow up. One has to adjust . I know it must feel a bit lonely, but it is nice to know they are happy,
posted by
C_C_T
on October 1, 2012 at 12:22 AM
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Hiya CC - a slithery poem?? Great job with the descriptive verses my friend.
Yes a little bit sad that both my girls are away. My daughter loves her Uni in England so that sort of makes up for it. Thanks for asking CC.
posted by
shobana
on September 30, 2012 at 11:52 PM
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Re: Annicita
A. No but I have the feeling it is big.I don't know which is worse to be crushed or bitten, crushed I guess.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:44 PM
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Hi Jay it was funny my sister has a shed and she noticed a mouse climbing up a string to get to the bird feeder very amusing until they increased and started going up in relays and two ran indoors. So she had to dispense with the bird feeder. The mice have move on. Garter snakes hmm' I don't know much about those little chaps.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:41 PM
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Re: I'm still laughing about your "slither" and its 2 am in the morning!
PP I feel like one when I slither.Are you an artist as well
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:34 PM
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Justi
I did not see the dear lady Justi, it would be a job to recognise her if she does not wear clothes
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:29 PM
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Re: Ah but I love snakes...well special varieties of snakes.
Kabu I shall have to amend that you used to like them, but
what about this chap.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:25 PM
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Re: Snaky Sensation, CCT!
Thank you Ray , I must admit not my favourite creature, but I could not eat one.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:23 PM
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Re:PP
PP. If we but knew what a snake feels , if you are going to stamp on it with your heavy boots it is bound to be annoyed.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 11:19 PM
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Hey come on now were you in Eden? Was that you flirting with EVE. Loved this!
posted by
Justi
on September 30, 2012 at 11:05 PM
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I'm still laughing about your "slither" and its 2 am in the morning!
this looks sorta like a snake...
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 30, 2012 at 10:54 PM
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I really like this poem CC. Did I tell you we have garter snakes in the herb garden...But no mice.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 30, 2012 at 9:39 PM
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mmmmmm....did you read titanboa? now that was one scary snake to see!
posted by
Annicita
on September 30, 2012 at 8:11 PM
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Ah but I love snakes...well special varieties of snakes.
posted by
Kabu
on September 30, 2012 at 5:33 PM
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Snaky Sensation, CCT!
Interesting poem! 
posted by
Katray2
on September 30, 2012 at 2:39 PM
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It's a snake!
Well, most of us aren't expecting to step on a snake, so therefore we probably don't see it until it is already striking. Now, after a close reading of your poem, I see some entity is losing its skin and that should have led me to believe that, clearly, you have hidden a dangerous snake in that poem... for me to step upon! O, be still my heart...!
Had it been a real one, I would certainly be dead!
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 30, 2012 at 2:34 PM
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Re: One may run, but they cannot hide...like the imagery...
Oh dear PP. I am artless well a little bit so, would you recognise a snake.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 10:31 AM
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Re: CCT
Well to be sure Bill my old mate I thought it was the grapes one had to watch.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 10:29 AM
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Well it slithers FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 30, 2012 at 10:28 AM
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What an amazing poem that I find this to be. I love how it builds up.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 30, 2012 at 9:50 AM
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One may run, but they cannot hide...like the imagery...
Will be forced to mull this one over for awhile. There is just too much here to digest in a few moments. This will keep me busy and out of trouble for a little while, anyway
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on September 30, 2012 at 9:09 AM
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CCT
þA person needs to watch those grapevines. They’ll tie up you sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 30, 2012 at 8:32 AM
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