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I know...
she was the beginning of my poetry writing...
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 10, 2012 at 10:23 PM
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PoeticPoetry
I had tears in my eyes...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 10, 2012 at 12:31 PM
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Thank you lion, for your response.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 10, 2012 at 11:05 AM
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Yes, SF, I suppose it would.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 10, 2012 at 10:49 AM
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Thanks for the hug. I was looking for a way to describe the unutterable
pain when I wrote it. And writing about it seemed to be therapeutic; seemed to be some kind of release when placed on the paper. Most of my stuff I edit and rewrite quite often and I have a lot of fun with each attempt, but this poem has always been left alone since I first wrote it. I can't handle it anymore.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 10, 2012 at 10:47 AM
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You take us on quite the emotional roller coaster.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 10, 2012 at 9:53 AM
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sometimes I feel that I am cursed, when a tragedy strikes. but it only ego
posted by
dsm_tchr
on October 10, 2012 at 7:15 AM
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This is beautifully written, the heartbreak infuses every line
posted by
lionreign
on October 10, 2012 at 3:31 AM
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Jacky this came from your heart. Terribly moving you must have hug
posted by
C_C_T
on October 10, 2012 at 12:05 AM
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Jackleen was my granddaughter who died when she was a few hours old.
I was allowed to hold her for a little while before they took her to autopsy and cut her into little pieces to determine her death. It was traumatic. I never got over it. Obviously. Years later, I still write about her.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on October 9, 2012 at 8:22 PM
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You are right it is sad. But who is Jackleen?
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 9, 2012 at 8:01 PM
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