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Excellent poetry, my friend.
posted by
PoeticPoetry
on January 31, 2013 at 12:06 PM
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You paint the scene well with words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 31, 2013 at 10:44 AM
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what a sad story of a man forgotten
posted by
Lanetay
on January 31, 2013 at 7:00 AM
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Very well done! And yes - sad.
posted by
adnohr
on January 31, 2013 at 4:16 AM
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Yes a really good one Simone, I really enjoyed reading this.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 30, 2013 at 11:04 PM
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Sinome
You make life poetically lovely.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 30, 2013 at 7:46 PM
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soad things do happen and you have captured one of those happenings here
with wonderful work.
posted by
Kabu
on January 30, 2013 at 3:07 PM
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There are many song writers and recording artists who relay certain aspects of their lives into their music, as I assume most musicians eventually do. Nicely portrayed. 
posted by
JimmyA
on January 30, 2013 at 2:22 PM
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Simone
It is always sad to witness a man's ruin, and you have caught it poignantly...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 30, 2013 at 12:11 PM
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Lovely work today Sinome. I see this image playing out in my mind. I suppose I should count myself lucky as my addictions have brought more applause, and of course those pointing fingers too, as I keep it no secret. Thank God those in my family and my church accept me for who I am, or should I say for who I have become, as do my extended family, the readers of Blogit.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 30, 2013 at 11:32 AM
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