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Yes I have just read the first and second part Collene remember stories are difficult to follow on these blogs. The second part came to me as a nice relief from the torment, I am afraid I cannot find any excuse for such horrible treatment.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 16, 2013 at 11:30 AM
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I AM GLAD I READ THE SECOND PART.I AM LOVING THE FLOW OF YOUR WRITING.YOUR STYLE IS AWESOME AND SO FAR I THINK THE STORY IS VERY INTERESTING.
posted by
NIGHTWRITE
on February 16, 2013 at 10:59 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you Sam, it is a far larger challenge to me than poetry. I am new to writting just starting to build my confidence. You have been very kind to me! 
posted by
Collene
on February 14, 2013 at 9:32 PM
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Even before it was revealed in the story I wondered if Ava was going to be able to pull it off, too! Great timing to introduce the character and the back story was just enough! It all was inserted rather nicely! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 14, 2013 at 5:07 PM
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Thank you very much for reading, I'll be adding to this every Thursday. 
posted by
Collene
on February 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM
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Hi there! I went back to read the former post first. An interesting story - woll be back to follow up!
posted by
adnohr
on February 14, 2013 at 3:31 AM
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