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Sinome
Love is deep and compassion is even deeper as you paint the picture of feelings deep within. Nice writing.
posted by
fememefeme
on February 16, 2013 at 7:24 PM
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wonderful selfless love portrayed as only Simone can do. Love it !!!
posted by
Kabu
on February 16, 2013 at 12:39 PM
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Sinome
It's nice to dream even impossible dreams...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 16, 2013 at 11:27 AM
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You have done it again with another beautitful poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 16, 2013 at 10:39 AM
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Sinome
You must have been part of the love that created Kabu and I with all the world's happiness in our lives.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 16, 2013 at 10:06 AM
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Sinome
þWhat Word can’t do love can draw and make real love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 16, 2013 at 8:24 AM
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sounds like a wonderful world to be in
posted by
Lanetay
on February 16, 2013 at 8:16 AM
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Beautiful as aways
As I read this I am so thankful for my perfect world I have found now. Many Blessings Love and Light
posted by
skye08
on February 16, 2013 at 7:33 AM
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Really? If he worried that my being there spoils his happiness I'd let him create his own perfect world! 
posted by
adnohr
on February 16, 2013 at 7:04 AM
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I love this proem. It is the perfect world we are all looking for
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on February 16, 2013 at 1:36 AM
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If only Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 15, 2013 at 11:29 PM
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