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BPThe elements in this section promise to come together and invite your readers back to read love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 22, 2013 at 9:16 PM
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adnohr
I enjoy you writing anyway, now this really is going to leave me wondering about the rest of it sis
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 22, 2013 at 6:28 PM
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An awesome beginning
posted by
Justi
on March 22, 2013 at 5:31 PM
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Now you have me wondering what the answer will be! Nice start, too! sam 
posted by
sam444
on March 22, 2013 at 1:54 PM
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I hope this isn't based on a true account! Too sad already . . . ! 
posted by
JimmyA
on March 22, 2013 at 1:48 PM
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I wonder how she ended up in that position.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2013 at 10:32 AM
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What a start....more please don't stop...this has grabbed me from the start
posted by
Kabu
on March 22, 2013 at 9:17 AM
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adnohr
You put us right into the midst of a life-and-death scene - by all means, more...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 22, 2013 at 8:54 AM
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Oops. My first comment was insufficient.
Feedback: excellent framing, just enough detail, perfectly drawn scene. As a reader I already care about these characters and want to know more.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 22, 2013 at 7:20 AM
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Oh, damn, that's good! More, more, more....
posted by
Pat_B
on March 22, 2013 at 7:18 AM
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