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Re: Annicita
I'm thinking of moving town (and house and job)
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 3:11 AM
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Re: 2Philomena
I agree, and sometimes we just need to find new plac es for them to do that
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 3:07 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, I agree
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 3:05 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you, I hope some of my enthusiasm and determination carried through
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 3:04 AM
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Re: Sinome
I think there is a bit of that but it's combined with having seen a better place for me
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:45 AM
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Re: FormerStudentIntern
Yes there is
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:38 AM
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Re: Rumor
Absolutely. I have plans to move but they will take some time and effort to get going and it's so much easier to sit in the sun...
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:37 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Great, I have always wanted to summon elephants with my warbling 
It's not, but the more optimistically we can approach life the brighter it seems to be
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:36 AM
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Re: lovelyladymonk
Thank you, no this is one of the few places I am not thinking of leaving
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:27 AM
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Re: Ciel
Thank you. I actually find blank verse much much harder - I find myself rhyming by accident. I don't think I am matured enough as a writer to manage such a big medium
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2013 at 2:22 AM
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A New Place
There is always room for our wings to spread.
posted by
2Philomena
on May 5, 2013 at 9:25 AM
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lionreign
BThere’s always room for inspiration. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 3, 2013 at 5:02 AM
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Now that is a fine call to action so to speak! And, I liked how it kept building as it went along which made me feel like I should actually do something, too! BRAVO! sam 
posted by
sam444
on May 2, 2013 at 11:23 PM
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sounds like you are up for some adventure or at least traveling to new places...one of my favorite things to do
posted by
Annicita
on May 2, 2013 at 4:41 PM
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Ahhh :-) the lure of adventure ... it must be Spring sipping into your veins :-) Great poem! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on May 2, 2013 at 12:00 PM
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There is great excitement that comes from the unknown.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2013 at 11:44 AM
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lionreign...
sometimes that restless feeling inside us telling us to find a new place so we can grow caan be a challenge to follow through on...we like the "status quo", but once we strike out, new worlds await.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 2, 2013 at 11:37 AM
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You could be the king of the jungle. I liked this poem. Very optimistic, It looks easy ,but I know it is not always so.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 2, 2013 at 11:22 AM
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Brilliant as always, lionreign. But please tell me you're not leaving us, are you??!!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on May 2, 2013 at 8:34 AM
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I like the style of this...
The rhymes aren't forced, nor the poem forced to fit them, and the message is up-beat, determined, and refreshing. Do you ever write blank verse, going just for the rhythms of the words you join up, and the meaning? I find sometimes that blank and free verse allows for much more emotional impact.
posted by
Ciel
on May 2, 2013 at 7:19 AM
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