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Re: UtahJay
Thanks Jay
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:37 AM
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Re: JimmyA
They probably wouldn't but I rather liked the image of the two having a quick moan about the Earth
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:35 AM
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Re: Rumor
thank you, I am delighted that you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:32 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Well everyone must have their good points 
thank you
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:24 AM
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Re: Sinome
Well my theory is that you are likely to miss seeing the things you are most used to, so an angel who is used to seeing greater levels of love and beauty might not see the lesser amounts present on Earth while the devil, who is not used to seeing any at all, might be overwhelmed by all the love
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:18 AM
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Re: Kabu
Well they were kindred at one point 
I agree it is a wonderful world... I'll skip the rodents though
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:15 AM
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Re: BC-A
That's often the way, isn't it?
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:12 AM
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Re: FormerStudentIntern
Thank you, they were a useful way to explore an idea
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:09 AM
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Re: MsJudy
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on June 21, 2013 at 3:06 AM
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Wonderfully done Lion.
posted by
UtahJay
on June 19, 2013 at 9:41 PM
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Very cool poem. Odd though that a devil ( or THE devil ) would care about sharing such things with an angel . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on June 19, 2013 at 2:01 PM
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lionreign...
What a great poem, with a twist setting the whole thing off perfectly - the devil sees the good things while the angel sees the bad...highly imaginative and nicely done.
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posted by
Rumor
on June 19, 2013 at 12:08 PM
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Sounds like the little devil in all of us Lion, not too bad when it comes down to the crunch.
liked this.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 19, 2013 at 12:48 AM
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What an amazing twist to the old stereotypes ! A devil that sees beauty and goodness and an angel that misses it until he is shown it... Great poem! xoxoxo
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Sinome
on June 18, 2013 at 8:01 PM
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no devil that but another angel in disguise. It is a wonderful
world, just get away to where the air is clean and fresh and a Chipmunk comes and eats nuts in your lap.
posted by
Kabu
on June 18, 2013 at 5:23 PM
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lionreign
QThe action to do’s open our hearts. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on June 18, 2013 at 3:16 PM
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That was quite the interaction between the angel and the devil...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 18, 2013 at 9:57 AM
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A Lesson For An Angel
I thought your poem was very discriptive and written very well.
posted by
MsJudy
on June 18, 2013 at 8:12 AM
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