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Sinome
Poetry always as beautiful as a sunset. Thank you for visiting my post and much love to you from us.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 2, 2013 at 9:22 PM
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This is so beautiful, and so true. Even if/when the love seems to come apart at the seams, becomes frayed, or faded, the love is still there, and makes all the difference in the world, because you experienced it.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 2, 2013 at 7:44 PM
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Love is a great anticipation..
posted by
MsJudy
on July 2, 2013 at 7:35 PM
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Sinome
This is so expressive as always. Love is all encompassing and so is it's shadow when, for any reason, love moves even a little. God bless you dear one.
posted by
Justi
on July 2, 2013 at 7:04 PM
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oh yes the promise of love....isn't it wonderful?!
posted by
Annicita
on July 2, 2013 at 5:58 PM
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Sinome
This is a sigh in words love. BC-A, Bill's R
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posted by
BC-A
on July 2, 2013 at 3:09 PM
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This is incredibly beautiful. I'm so glad to read you again. Please forgive my long time away from your posts. I really do enjoy your poems!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on July 2, 2013 at 11:13 AM
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To my comment I should add...'even for me?'
posted by
adnohr
on July 2, 2013 at 6:42 AM
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Beautiful, as always. There really is another 'when', is there??
posted by
adnohr
on July 2, 2013 at 6:32 AM
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When we fall in love we change the world and make it just a little bit better I think...wonderful poem Sinome.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 1, 2013 at 10:20 PM
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Wow! I love this use of diminutive and the constant reflectiveness of the voice. A pleasure to read a piece where a poet seems in complete command of her language!.....bravo....
posted by
jfm32
on July 1, 2013 at 10:15 PM
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Sinome
So well expressed - when we fall in love, the world does not change, but it changes for us...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 1, 2013 at 8:20 PM
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you are so right darlin'. I used to think that true love had passed me by ..then of course there was Wiley. Now I understand the not if...but when.
posted by
Kabu
on July 1, 2013 at 7:36 PM
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You well-describe how the world will be different for him.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 1, 2013 at 5:54 PM
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