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Sinome
"Both brightness and peace can be found in this poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 11, 2013 at 3:04 PM
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Sinome
We have that overheated weather here, but no beaches only wetlands full of frogs, ducks and Canada geese. Loved your poetry
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 10, 2013 at 8:20 PM
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Awesome peom! Very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
posted by
MsJudy
on July 10, 2013 at 7:28 PM
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lovely poem about those sun worshippers
posted by
Annicita
on July 10, 2013 at 2:31 PM
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Sinome
Yes, such a powerful poem. Get cancer but wow I am beautifully tanned, what a scam and it has been since at least for as long as I can remember. Love the poem.
posted by
Justi
on July 10, 2013 at 10:27 AM
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Sinome
Yes! An excellent poem - we've all been there, haven't we? We delude ourselves into pretending that time off is time out...And yet, there's something deliciously enticing about sun and sand and waves rolling onto the beach, though I can do without motors, I much prefer the hum of the rigging on my sailboat...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 10, 2013 at 10:08 AM
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I remember doing the same, trying to stop time on some sandy beach. Your words remind me how futail it is, and how wonderful at the same time, especially for a mountain boy.
don't mind me...the spell-checker is not working.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 10, 2013 at 9:37 AM
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I used to sunbake when I got the chance, loved to walk an empty beach almost nude....Not these days. not anymore.
posted by
Kabu
on July 9, 2013 at 7:50 PM
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I like the shade. Nice poem.
posted by
Dr_JPT
on July 9, 2013 at 7:19 PM
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Ahhhh - don't you love summer?
posted by
adnohr
on July 9, 2013 at 6:42 PM
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What a vivid scene you have painted with words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 9, 2013 at 6:01 PM
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